The Modern "Lords Prayer"....

I thought that the "Lords Prayer" needed a modern english update from the old english, so that the esoteric christian could understand it better. So this is my rendition... Our Father-God, who is within us.... Holy is your name..... May your kingdom be realized... May Your will be our will..... On Earth as it is within us.... Grant us sustenence each day... And forgive us our selfishness... As we forgive others that are selfish... May we not offend you by being tempted... Lead us from the path of the false-ego... For You are the source of all power and Love